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Tuesday, 1 August 2017

The Outsiders Year 10 written assessment English



SEXXXY 1

When the greasers come onto johnny and he stabbed Bob.


We see this when Johnny and … were at the park together and a mustang parks up near them, bob and a few of the other socs come out and try to drown them so Johnny got the switchblade and stabbed Bob.

This shows the anger between both gangs. This makes the audience feel anxious for what is going to happen next.

This was done to show the hatred between both gangs, and show what some of the outcomes are when they do fight.

This reminds me of a scene on shortland street when t.k was taken hostage, he got away and killed the kidnapper and left him there to die.


SEXXXY 2

In the story when the church caught on fire and Ponyboy and Johnny save the kids.

We see this when Ponyboy and Johnny are driving around, they see black smoke from afar, they choose to follow it, it leads to a church on fire with still some young kids left inside. Ponyboy and Johnny leaped out of the car and ran into the church to get the kids out.

This shows that PonyBoy and Johnny aren't all bad people because they put their lives in danger to save the kids.

This was done to show what the real Ponyboy and Johnny were like, kind people with loving hearts.

This reminded me of the London fires that happened yesterday.



SEXXXY 3


When Johnny dies in the hospital.

We see this when Johnny is in the hospital because of his burns and injuries from the fire.

This makes the audience feel upset because a hero that saved many kids died.

This was done to show that he put his life in danger to save kids and he didn't care about the consequences of dying when he was in the church.

This reminds me of when a patient on the show code black, dies.



SEXXXY 4


When  Ponyboy and Johnny cut all their hair off and dye it

We see this after they run away and start to live in an abandon place, they cut and dye it so they look different as they killed bob, and the police and public will be out looking for them.

This makes the audience more intrigued to the movie and get more excited about what's going to happen next.

The purpose of this was so that the police wouldn't find them and so people wouldn't dob them in for killing Bob.

4 comments:

  1. Hey Cherieeee! I really like your layout and how you can clearly see the parts of the paragraph! I can connect because I wrote similar ideas on my essay! Next time I guess you could add a introduction or conclusion but apart from that, superrrrrrrrrr good job!! ♥♥

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  2. Cherie, I really like how you connected to this story like a reader, I know understand the multiple conflicts within the book. Next time you could proof read the paragraphs cause in paragraph one you missing could words like johny and ...

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  3. Cherie, I really like when you explained the scene in paragraph 1, it makes me think that in my next essay I will explain the scene, next time you could make sure you have written your sentence fully

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  4. You did really good explaining how and why things were done in the film. This reminds me of my essay because I wrote similar stuff. Next time you could go into more detail with your link.

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